Words small and strong
- Write more powerful texts in plain English
- Reduce your unconscious use of jargon
Build your text with short rather than long words; it will pack all the more punch. Long words
take time to read, because our minds can only process small amounts of data at
once. If you bundle thorny words next to each other, you will turn your text
into a thicket and reading into a slog: Excessively convoluted vocabulary, say,
takes time to untangle. Short words, by contrast, are quick to absorb at a
glance and a walk in the park. Thus, in our daily routines, we shorten long
terms to tame them—think of the mighty refrigerator that has long bowed to the
Short words tap,
as a rule, a widely shared culture. Even the latest catchword may have deep
roots: The buzz, now applied to social media, comes from the hum we make to
mimic insects, which over centuries has spawned a number of other buzzwords.
Many old, vivid terms are not just quick to read, but to trigger our senses.
They evoke sounds, smells, and scenes that fire up our brains. As such, they
hold more power than dense concepts.
Simple words make your prose more gripping
also tend to unite all age groups and social classes. They bring people closer
to each other when jargon would stand between them and push them apart. Complex
words, which can be useful to convey complex ideas, just as often confuse
people—and indeed are used in writing that seeks to impress and dictate.
It is no
surprise, then, that some types of writing deftly avoid big words. To engage a
broad public, retail slogans will wield words short and strong. In the late
1950s, Volkswagen launched a landmark ad campaign. which featured a tiny car on
an empty page titled “Think small”: basic words to put cheaper goods within
anyone’s reach. Poetry is another field that draws on simpler speech that rings
deep. To borrow from Letitia Elizabeth Landon:
The language of
cinema holds the same sway. A blockbuster series like the Lord of the Rings
owes much to its poetic, rhythmic, almost monosyllabic speech: “Three days’ and
nights’ pursuit. No food, no rest. No sign of our quarry but what bare rock can
tell!” Thus many films boil down to simple, potent lines that become
catch-phrases within our popular culture. Take the now ubiquitous Godfather
quote, “I’m gonna make him an offer he can’t refuse.” The real magic in these
movies—and novels–does not blaze out of a wizard’s wand or a villain’s pistol;
the audience is bound by a spell that is cast in short words that flow well.
this, for better or worse. Like advertisers, they exploit the power of
suggestive slogans to sell their wares. They may also, at crucial times, rouse
the public to embrace a nobler cause. Churchill rallied his people for war
against Nazi Germany with a speech that stands as a monumental example of
spellbinding language. Note the sparse and shrewd use of words longer than two
syllables, stressed in bold below:
We shall go on
to the end. We shall fight in France, we shall fight on the seas and oceans, we
shall fight with growing confidence and growing strength in the air, we shall
defend our island, whatever the cost may be. We shall fight on the beaches, we
shall fight on the landing grounds, we shall fight in the fields and in the
streets, we shall fight in the hills; we shall never surrender […].
We shall fight
in the offices too, where the battle for plain English is raging. Most trades
are overrun by ever more jargon. Leverage, synergies, paradigms, streamlining,
and disruptiveness crowd out simple words through syllable creep. In the aid
sector, for example, projects are not tracked and reviewed but monitored and evaluated.
Rather than cutting back on clutter, the trend is to package it into acronyms
like M&E, which ensure that anyone who isn’t in the know will stay in the
dark. But a few basic rules will help repel the assault.
First, use long
words only when needed. Some technical terms cannot be abridged; technical
itself is a good illustration. Long words may be more precise: A student could
be a sophomore or a postgraduate. Long words can be concise too: Philosophy,
identity or civilization are common concepts that convey vast meaning in little
space. Long words can also be used to create stylistic effects. By slowing down
the reading, they take part in its rhythm, for instance when used at the end of
a clause, discerningly. Besides, usual words are not always short: Substitute
has no better alternative than surrogate or replacement, and vice versa.
Second, avoid as
much as possible words that contain a prefix or suffix—and even more so those
that pile them on unthinkably. A prefix or suffix by nature will stretch a
word, not always for good reason. Indeed, we might as well save space rather
than economize it. Long adverbs rarely add much to your text, but they
undoubtedly clutter it. They may also rob the verb of the action it should
describe. Put the action in the verb itself, by having someone droop her head
and drag her feet, rather than walk despondently.
Most trades are overrun by ever more jargon
Third and last,
bear in mind that simple words are the secret to making your prose more visual
and gripping. We often overuse complex, hefty words and neglect the wealth of
vibrant and nimble ones. This is mostly because we reason in abstract concepts,
whereas human communication works through images, which are best conjured
through short words and phrases. Thus you may think of jargon as nonsensical circumlocutions but your writing will gain from just calling it hot air.
Language is full of compounds made from simple words, which provide many a
shortcut and workaround that remain easy to process.
As a rule,
writing in short words takes up more space. It can also take more time, as we
fight against the jargon to which we all too easily revert. (This text, for
instance, uses words that are much shorter than average at Synaps.) But it is
entirely worth the effort: Writing “small” may slow your writing, but it will
speed up our reading and ramp up our pleasure.
4 September 2019
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